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Your heart's a mess
but
I confess the same.
I know it hurts
but please,
I beg you
don't give up
just yet.
There are much greater
things to come.
There are great things
in store for you.
I've got a lot of
love to give
and I intend to
give it to
all of you.
You there,
sitting and waiting
for judgement day,
for your prayers to
finally be answered,
to be saved.
I'll be your
savior,
I'll be your
grace.
I'll be your
light,
I'll be your
guiding hand.
I'll be your
lover,
I'll be your
friend.
Don't worry,
I'll never leave you
alone,
you don't have
to cry on your own
anymore.
I'll be there with you,
holding your hand.
It doesn't matter
if you're young
or you're poor,
I'll love you
till your scars
have gone.
It doesn't matter
if you're big
or you're small,
I love you all
just the same.
That I promise
will never change.
You are mine,
as I am yours.
What hurts you,
hurts me
just the same.
See,
we're not so different
after all.
If only they could see
what I see,
a beautiful soul
in need of
some sweet love.
A goodnight's kiss
is all you need
to fix this mess,
you'll feel better
after you've
had a goodnight's rest.
Don't worry
about the others,
they just fear
what you seek.
A perfect place,
I know it seems strange
but in such a perfect place
they could never hold
such power over you.
So hold your head
up high
cause honestly
if all they can
do is hate,
you are automatically
ten times better.
I would like to make this into a song or something (and become famous) but I'm untalented and can't sing or play any sort of instrument.
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oOMoonLightOo Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Student General Artist
bby. I can make it a song. I can do it. I always wanted to do a good original song but I suck at writing. What kind of tempo do you think this would have? I wanna do it.
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meowxkitty95 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Psssh. You're asking the wrong person xD I don't know anything about tempos or anything :icon0u0plz:
Sorry I can't really help, but I'm sure whatever you decide will be absolutely beautiful, just like you~ :iconmonkeyloveplz:
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT see you aren't bad at poetry
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meowxkitty95 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Student General Artist
I never said I was bad it's just I think my style is weird. :I And that just makes everything else worse. But thank you! :heart:
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
well I think you style is developing quite beautifully
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meowxkitty95 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Well thank you :iconilikeitplz:
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconveryhappyfaceplz:
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I might now some guy who could put this to music
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meowxkitty95 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Hmmmm I don't know though. I kinda wanted to do it myself, you know?
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OK
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